Fic: Wordless

[gyllespi.livejournal.com]

Title: Wordless
Pairing: House/Wilson
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 100
Summary: Like many things between them, it starts with silence.
Notes: Uh, yeah. I wrote this to try and get out of my writer's block (I'm working on another H/W challenge at the moment) and to see if I could do a naughty drabble. I'm rather inexperienced with smut, so comment with your thoughts! ^^;


It starts without words, without talk of any kind to disturb the electricity crackling between them. House throws open the door, Wilson looks up, House grabs his tie and his teeth and lips and tongue are pushing painfully against Wilson’s own. Before long, he is wearing much less clothing.

Somewhere in the middle, Wilson has enough presence of mind to close the blinds.

It starts with frantic, pulsing energy that neither one of them has the courage to interrupt with speech. It starts with silence, but it ends with hot breath and sweat on faces and Wilson moaning House’s name.

Comments

[piepeloe.livejournal.com]

Uh. I liked it. It's hot but not too explicit, the best kind of hot IMO.

One nitpicky thing though: I assume they're in Wilson's office because House walks in and Wilson looks up, but then...What blinds is Wilson closing? His ofice isn't the fishbowl House's is and I don't imagine anyone would be looking in from the balcony.

Of course, Wilson may just be more cautious than I would be...Maybe I have a slight exhibitionist streak I am unaware of.

Aaaaanyway. Hope you get over your writer's block, because this was...yummy.

[gyllespi.livejournal.com]

Thanks. I may have erred on the shy side, but oh well - I'm easing myself into it, LOL.

...yeah. These are the sort of things I don't notice when I breeze on through it really quickly. *facepalm* Yes, I was sort of setting this in Wilson's office, but I couldn't remember the exact design, besides the balcony windows. So I guess Wilson is just being cautious, as it's exactly the sort of thing he'd think of, even in the midst of being jumped by House. XD

^_^ Thanks a bunch, I'm definitely going to try and finish!

[antychan.livejournal.com]

Actually Wilson's office has blinds, left and right of its door. At least in the scene after Wilson's been talking to the naughty nurse in 3x05.

And moaning!Wilson! *purrs*

[gyllespi.livejournal.com]

I think what would make my day is Wilson, out of nowhere, moaning "House" onscreen, even if it's in a completely nonsexual context. (If there is such a thing between those two. :P) That alone would give just about every H/W shipper on earth a spontaneous orgasm.

/ramble

...yeah. Thanks for the clarification, and glad you enjoyed!

[http://users.livejournal.com/_auberginedream/]

Gah! You need to write more smut. Since it's such a small fic, every image had such a huge impact on the story.
I wish I could see this actually happen. That'd make my year.

Lovely fic!
(and nice name: " "I understand what a nickname is", said Snape.")

[gyllespi.livejournal.com]

Gah! You need to write more smut.

*big grin* I may do that, then. :DD

(Heh. Not that many people notice my "nickname". XD)

[seriouslyroo.livejournal.com]

Oh God.

I love you.

[crazy-hw-fan.livejournal.com]

that was very sexy. i love how Wilson gets all paranoid even when House is sexing him up. if House was sexing me up i wouldn't have it in me to pull the blinds, hell, i'd let everyone see. lol I LOVED IT!

[gyllespi.livejournal.com]

XD I would probably be the voyeur peeking in on the sexy goodness that is House/Wilson, LOL.

Thank you! Glad you liked!

[lana-ftw.livejournal.com]

smutty smutty smut, i love smut :]

anyway, that was simple enough, but certainly got my imagine going off in a million different directions. it also sounds like dom/possessive!house, which is my weakness.

loved this, thanks!

[fearless-jones.livejournal.com]

Franz Ferdinand!

I love this, i really do. :D

[magegirl8.livejournal.com]

I love it. I can see it perfectly. So hot. I like that even though you described none of the smut in detail, I can still see it perfectly in my mind's eye.



...and btw - the lyrics you posted made me think of the second half of that refrain:relax the fraying wool, slacken ties And I'm not to look at you in the shoe, but the eyes, find the eyes

If one pay attention to it for a moment, those lyrics sound really H/W - from House's pov. Especially his issues with how he deems WIlson dresses for 'seduction' . The shoes, the ties...... And of course the fact that they always express their feelings through long, passionate stares of ust.

[no-eden.livejournal.com]

Somewhere in the middle, Wilson has enough presence of mind to close the blinds.

This is perfect. And so, so in character. :)