Grabbing His Cane

Wow. Stunned by this disturbing, dark, intense, and masterfully presented fic. The second person worked beautifully here to allow us into young House's head while also lending to the dream premise. It gave the impression of House observing himself, which worked for the dream, but also furthered the sense of detachment he cultivated in the circumstance. The focus on color and surrounding also worked well. The attempt to withdraw from the situation added an element of realism. Excellent story. I'm surprised it's your first. It definitely shouldn't be your last.